Modern day Slavery is a huge problem in India. Nearly 16 million people are enslaved in India today. This is roughly the same as the population of Chile. In 2014-2015 three thousand people were freed from slavery. It was shocking to me that with the 1600 groups working against slavery they were only able to free 3000 people. There are many ways to become enslaved, but one that is more abundant in India than anywhere else is becoming enslaved from debt accumulated by paying for a wedding. An Indian wedding is a huge ceremony that can last for days. It is common for families to borrow money from very corrupt lenders. Once they can not pay the debt back the entire family becomes enslaved and it is very hard to escape. There are now weddings organized by previous victims of slavery where a bunch of couple get married at once. One wedding had over one thousand people attend and five couples got married costing each family only around fifteen dollars. One Indian police officer claims that when she tries to contact the human trafficking department she is transferred to a department dealing with traffic problems.
Sources
http://www.telegraphindia.com/1071016/asp/opinion/story_8436850.asp
http://www.freetheslaves.net/where-we-work/india/
Friday, September 30, 2016
Tuesday, September 27, 2016
Learning History Through Film
included was recorded in Solomon’s narrative. Overall both of these films were historically accurate and displayed the information in a way that is easy to understand.
Work Cited
History.com
Provided information on the accuracy of Glory and information on the attack on Fort Wagner
Provided information on the accuracy of Glory and information on the attack on Fort Wagner
National Archives
Provided historical documents that proved Solomon Northup's story was true
Provided historical documents that proved Solomon Northup's story was true
National humanities center
Provided information about the life of a slave from The incident in the Life of a Slave Girl by Harriet Jacobs
Provided information about the life of a slave from The incident in the Life of a Slave Girl by Harriet Jacobs
American Historical Association
Provided information on the historical accuracy of 12 years a lave and also had information about the importance of religion in the life of a Slave
Provided Information on how the director of 12 years a slave made the movie and discussed its historical accuracy
Provided information on the historical accuracy of 12 years a lave and also had information about the importance of religion in the life of a Slave
Provided Information on how the director of 12 years a slave made the movie and discussed its historical accuracy
Images
Attack on Fort Wagner |
Union Soldiers |
Solomon singing gospel music |
Solomon at Auction |
Solomon eating before he was kidnapped |
Wednesday, September 14, 2016
Reflection on Paraphrase practice
Today I learned how to paraphrase a source and successfully incorporate a quote. Before this class I did not know the difference between paraphrasing and summarizing. Paraphrasing is a much more effective way to prove a point because it is more specific and includes more detail than a summary. I also learned how to add information to a quote to further explain it and how to trim the quote so tat it only includes the information I need.
This is what I learned today:
This is what I learned today:
- Only use a direct quote when it adds power and style to my writing.
- Always make it clear, from context, that I understand the full meaning of he quote.
- Whether I quote or paraphase, I must always I mus always be transparent about the source and how I'm using it.
- If I use another authors exact words in any way I must use quotation marks and give credit, If I use another authors presentation of facts or ideas, but put their ideas in my own words, I better have a good reason for doing so and give credit.
- Hyperlinkng is so easy there is no excuse for not being transparent about my sources.
I understand these statements.
Monday, September 12, 2016
Practicing, Incorporating a Quote
"The decision to end the movie with the failed assault at Wagner solidifies this progressive theme, which links the men to one another ."
Glory was a very powerful movie because it did a very good job of developing all the characters. Once the audience felt like they really liked the characters they all heroically die attacking Fort Wagner, but this helped the movie make a key point. As one film critic said, "The decision to end the movie with the failed assault at Wagner . . . links the men to one another." The theme adressed in this quote was the unity of the people in America. The black soldiers and white officer were finally united in death, while fighting to unite the states.
Glory was a very powerful movie because it did a very good job of developing all the characters. Once the audience felt like they really liked the characters they all heroically die attacking Fort Wagner, but this helped the movie make a key point. As one film critic said, "The decision to end the movie with the failed assault at Wagner . . . links the men to one another." The theme adressed in this quote was the unity of the people in America. The black soldiers and white officer were finally united in death, while fighting to unite the states.
Paraphrase pratice
CW memory article
" As for problems, well, they abound throughout the movie such as the profile of the regiment, which is presented primarily as a unit of fugitive slaves. Most of the men were free blacks from Massachusetts. Other problems include the time frame for the raising and training of the regiment which began in 1863 rather than 1862 as well as the failure to acknowledge Shaw’s marriage at any point in the movie."
My paraphrase
The movie was not very historically accurate. The 54 regiment was mostly made up of free black men from Massachusetts, and the movie portrayed them as runaway slaves. The movie also did not mention that Shaw was married. Also the 54 regiment was trained in 1863 but the movie started in 182. These are just some examples of what was wrong with the movie.
" As for problems, well, they abound throughout the movie such as the profile of the regiment, which is presented primarily as a unit of fugitive slaves. Most of the men were free blacks from Massachusetts. Other problems include the time frame for the raising and training of the regiment which began in 1863 rather than 1862 as well as the failure to acknowledge Shaw’s marriage at any point in the movie."
My paraphrase
The movie was not very historically accurate. The 54 regiment was mostly made up of free black men from Massachusetts, and the movie portrayed them as runaway slaves. The movie also did not mention that Shaw was married. Also the 54 regiment was trained in 1863 but the movie started in 182. These are just some examples of what was wrong with the movie.
Friday, September 2, 2016
This week in class I learned a lot about slavery. I learned that slaves were forced to pick cotton much faster once the other parts of cotton processing became mechanized. I had never thought about how the ability to spin cotton faster created a need to weave cotton faster which created a need to clean cotton faster which created another need to pick the cotton faster. Machines were invented to speed up all of these processes except the picking because it was already being done basically for free. This meant instead of inventing a machine to pick the cotton slaves were just forced to work faster. Slave productivity was increased through very harsh methods of enforcement. People across America eventually found out about the level of brutality used on the slaves and this created a movement to end slavery, eventually contributing to the start of the Civil War.
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